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Grandpa RPG

was way better than that crap.

OMG!!

THIS IS SOOO MATURE!!
I cant believe how much violence I've just saw!

:)

if this is yer first flash... I think you have just made a good attempt,
Avoid using that music, it's annoying and recycled- cheers!

not bad

thers a saying in hollywood ''a good story well told.'' so you have the story but you just need to take some more time a work it out but all in all not bad

Nice try

Good concept but poorly executed. If this is your first submission then I understand why it appears so unpolished. Even if you have a great idea and are really anxious to get it out, try to make sure it looks good before you post it. The quality of animation may have been acceptable 6 or 7 years ago but with the capabilities of CS4 there really isn't any reason you couldn't spend more time on it until it looks awesome. Again, nice try and I look forward to future (and hopefully better :) ) Submissions from you.