Not bad not bad :) Probably the story line is a bit overused in the days etc but okish animation, nice and colorfull backgrounds. I guess the fat outlining is your style, I dunno if I like it but hey it's not bad flash.
but try something longer ok?
I like how the buglers got an imported truck, the steering wheel is on the right and they drive on the right side of the road.
ALOT better than some of the stuff I've seen
Good job man u shouldm keep going with rocketman next one should be alittle longer though. all in all good job.
Nice, colorful visuals and a driving beat make this a pretty good flash. Hope more can be done with the main chara. in future flash.