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yo this movie sucks
Author Comments
HI this is a flash I made for me and my friend I hope you like it.
Well, maybe the styles not for you, maybe it needs an update, leave a review if you believe so.
Lengths about 93 seconds at 12 fps and 900 frames or something.
Okay
It was pretty good, considering it's a first.
Conflicted
I liked it.... but I think just because I like that song.
Imagining it without music would make it pretty horrible.
It's just too slow and not surprising enough.
I'm not sure.
joesephcontreras responds:
It is ok. This was not made to impress. I will impress you if you want. Like, why did my penis cross the road? To get to the other vagina.
Alright.
You have put some effort in it, but, it lacks color and proper animation. The music gets a bit repetetive after a while and I didn't get the Animal Crossing thing. I mean, there were animals there, but not much else to suggest that these guys ended up in a this particular game. Also, there are ways to make funny cartons without using swearwords. Bad language has a limited comedy value, unless it's used in a good way, like in southpark for instance. Anyhow for a first movie it's OK. Alright. But there is alot of room for improvement.
joesephcontreras responds:
You're right, there is some effort in this, and it does lack color, wait, white and black are colors, so yeah, it lacks rainbow colors in it, which is what you like, yeah. Nah bee, its ok, I might use colors later, just not for this one. Yes there were a few animals, but there are a few animal crossing references in the background. True, there are ways to make funny cartons, with cows on the them that are brown because of the fact its CHOCOLATE, milk. Hahahahaha. Oh, for cartoons, yes I agree with you 100 percent, I like british comedy, you don't need to tell me twice about, what you said. And of course, there is room for improvement, as everything does. I know you know you're shit, you've been on newgrounds since 03.
Eh nothing special
I honestly think you could of tried harder or just basically but more effort into it. Add some color into it or maybe some voice acting and actual music from animal crossing to help the cause. Most of the animation was pretty boring and i didn't find any of it funny, except maybe the "sexy time" on the bed and the way you drew the animals.
joesephcontreras responds:
Dude, I'm not about to draw furrys animals for you, as sexy as that would be, I don't want little kids to start masturbating to my work. Also, I don't think yiff is so hip. Hell you have tooken your time to write that review though, what do you want my next animation to be.
Probably no color again, but then again.. and well, I could of tried harder this was two hours worth of work I think. No voices though, probably.
