Not very good
The voices were rubbish, I think you were too close to the mic (I could hear you breathing, and that's just creepy)
The animation wasn't any good either, maybe if you'd put some more effort into - and use some colour to make it seem better- it would become watchable without cringing. And use a more concise plot that is more clearly presented so that it doesn't drag on as much as this did. Give it another shot, I'm sure you can do better.