It's my first full length animation, one-minute long, and it actually has and end. Unfortunately, I don't know how to make a preloader. I tried using the preloader that Newgrounds provides you with. If it doesn't work... I'm very sorry, and I'll get to work on it right away.
Thank you and enjoy!
I'd like as much constructive criticism as possible, please. So I can better entertain people.
Kudos to you!
For your first flash, I think you did a very nice job! I love the cute little sound effects that you added. The only criticism i have is that the animation could have flowed more smoothly, but other than that, this is terrific! The animation itself is really good though. Try making more flashes. I recommend! ^O^ Anyways...so keep up the great work! XDDDDD
The Birds....They are evil
Pretty nice work. The art, music and the humor is well done. maybe the text could be a little more thicker next time and a little short (IMO)
keep up the good work
9/10 + 4/5
Thank you very much! I'll make the next animation longer, and easier to follow. This one goes by in a heartbeat.
Its good
For some reason this reminds me Azumanga Daioh... anyway, It`s good but can be litle longer.
I will be waiting for another flash for you, good luck =)
Well, I did use the music from Azumanga Daioh, the SFX were from Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney. Only stock sound I could find. And yeah I agree with you, it could be a little longer. I wish I was paying attention more to how long I was making it. It goes by a little too quickly.
Nice toon
The style of text and the music matched very well with the theme, good drawings especially on backgrounds, wish it were a bit longer though.
Definitely... I wish it were longer too. Unfortunately, I didn't have enough to look over this properly, and I'm still doing work for class. So, I posted it up anyway, I'm probably not gonna get back to it, so I'll make the next animation better.