Good
This is a start- pretty good animation, somewhat discernible sound, and, hey, at least you didn't post stick figure porn.
Bravo.
Author Comments
This is my first flash animation using my own original characters, Zarth and Dox. Ya, it's pretty bad. I didn't plan this thing out much, but I promise to work 10x harder on the next one!
bad sound
Work on the sound and a little on the animation.
Wasn't too bad
Animation was okay, your voice acting and writing needs work though.
AHHHAHAHAHAhahahahaaaa.......
funny
Killerclaud responds:
I see you made an account.
good, but could use some improvements...
For example, your sound clips of all the characters, plus your self-made acapella theme song were really poor quality sound. Next time, use a better microphone, or adjust your distance from the mic, it picks up more than you think it does!
Second, in some of the moving scenes, like when Zarth goes to the fridge, there was no indication that he was moving. put like a lamp or a door for him to pass, that way he'll look like he's moving.
it was funny, and I enjoyed it. keep up the good work!
Crosswinds
Killerclaud responds:
Thanks! I added a picture if that works.