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Paperland Adventure ep 1

rated 2.46 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original

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Jan 10, 2009 | 1:20 AM EST

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Author Comments

Steve and Lenny are two characters I made up a couple of months ago, Steve is a simple and mild character (who has his own flash, see 'Meet Steve') who takes charge in most places and likes to lead the way.
Lenny is his friend (or sidekick) and normally tags along.
When I created the two I decided to create a flash in which they travel to a far off place, in the end I decided to break it all down; Steve and Lenny goes to Paperland is the first a series of five parts that sees them travel to the fabled Paperland.
It is of course already completed and just needs to be uploaded.
I hope you enjoy it, I am currently working on my first flash since signing onto NG :)



Rated 2 / 5 stars

the music is good

is only the music. you need get better

Melzaar responds:

you english good


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

There's nothing here...

I didn't really see any actual animation in all. I don't even know why this is getting a 1. There are so many things wrong with this.

1. It's just a song. I'm not going to even acknowledge that you had to bubble things to represent characters. All this is, is a song.

2. Your "loading" screen isn't actually loading based on if it's loaded or not. You just showed the loading text for about 30 seconds, so that we could watch nothing while it "loaded." The truth is, this would only take 2 seconds to load.

Of course, this is probably a joke, so I shouldn't even be writing this.

Melzaar responds:

joke, haha


Rated 0 / 5 stars

no need to make more

this one was not very good at all. it's only redeeming quality was the mediocre song.