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ok so this is my first "real" game so far my last one didnt take long and it sucked. This one took me all week and due to time constrants i had to rush the last part. I would like to improve my skills so construtive critsim would be nice. Dont review if your are going to just say it sucks or whatever because i worked hard at this. Also the song is by me. It would of been longer but i am new at actionscripting and have spent many hours trying to fix it so let me know what you guys think.

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All and all it's a pretty shitty game. its two levels long and its way too easy. Also the game is really glitchy, when I first started the game I couldn't move no matter what buttons I pressed. I tried wasd, the arrow keys, and the forbidden ijkl and nothing worked. I'm assuming this is because of a glitch but it worked fine after I hit left click and play. It moved me to the left room on the first level and I was now able to move. your character moves painfully slow and it gets annoying fast. but all that being said that's not even what makes it a bad game. What makes it a bad game is how all you have to do is pick up the right items before going to the boss and you win with little to no obstacles in your way. I'm not saying this just to bash on your game but instead I hope you take this as constructive criticism to help you not make the same mistakes the next time you make a game.

Some suggestions to improve this game would be:
- Increase character speed
- Make more levels (at least 5)
- Make more obstacles (moving enemies would be nice)
- Make it so you actually fight the boss instead of just wining if you have the right items
Other less important suggestions:
- A leveling system with stats and whatnot
- An inventory screen

If you need any help or want to bounce some ideas off me just message me on NewGrounds, if not then good luck to you and I hope your next game turns out better.

fallensoul289 responds:

This is so old and was for a school project man. More like a test to see if I could actionscript. I don't see anything on your profile showing your stuff but I do hope you can do better them me. Like I said this is stuff first starting out. My later stuff is better and a lot
of my stuff is unpublished. Thanks for the review but I don't have time to animate anymore I don't need any help either.


Considering it has been 6 years since this game's previous review, I belive it is high time for another one. I thought that this was a nice little game, but that may be because of my soft spot for fantasy games, even if it was short [hence the title] it was overall NOT a waste of time and has the potential to be exceedingly better if you were to go back and make it longer, maybe add a combat system.

fallensoul289 responds:

It's so old and bad. Thanks for going easy, I don't animate anymore and it's been years since I have I still wish I would of finished some of my good stuff so I could of showed
My skills.


pretty good i like the way you redid the legend of zelda music

fallensoul289 responds:

Thank you for you're kind review.

Nice but...

Its very short. There are only 2 levels. Can be beaten in 5 minutes. No choices, except picking the shield or position. Not complete if you ask me.

fallensoul289 responds:

Well it was a project for school my friend i plan on releasing a bigger game

Credits & Info

3.13 / 5.00

Jan 9, 2009
1:14 PM EST
Adventure - Other