Better, not best
Drawing skills are clearly improved. Still improvable anyway. The fight may have been cooler if you made screen trembling at any fist, or something like that, is useful for giving the feel to the watcher. Try to watch the two Shock episodes and feel the pain!
10 becuase i know were your coming from
better animation from the first one, are you sure your not an animator lol
anyway i like the animation of the black monster. I also like how you intergrated 3d and 2d togather great job.
as for the concepts,
i like it but the a,,c,d thing not so much
also try and make your chracter not talk so much.
what I'm trying to say is while she talking the monsterjust sit there still, and doesnt do anything. And the fact that she's always second guessing her self makes her feel less of an hero and more of a chump, i mean she not an A class but she up there with them, also it breaks up the suspance
excellent story line and i like that it original...you couldn't have done better with the introduction...but the conclusion need more time...with a little more time and work this could be mainstream work...
very well made, drawing and sound are both good, some of the character movement could be more animated though, story is interesting.