This definitely does feel like a product from the 2000's. And judging by other reviews, it seemingly didn't grab much peoples attention at the time of its release.

If only we would know what current animation online would become, I feel like people would be more forgiving towards this, which I am.

This thing definitely has one thing that I feel like most modern webtoons lack; compassion into their work.

And the fact that I got such a 90's/00's vibe from this is more than I can say for most animations now.

Pacing still remains an issue after a decade and a half later - flunking one of the most important principles of animation; timing.

But other than that one glaring flaw, this is a pretty decent piece of history here. I'm not sure how helpful my feedback will be towards an older animation, but I really hope the creator has improved, as I am curious to see what he is doing in 2023.

very good for a first flash attempt

a little slow though. please respond to this, was this born from the shape craze created by stamper and johnny utah?

Good stuff

Really good for your first flash. Keep at it, I can't wait to see what you make with some more practice.

good...

but it was too slow. If you sped it up a little more, it'd be better.

Unusual

Kind of unusual. I quite liked the animation, but it felt like it was running slightly too slow - maybe it's just my machine.

I was sort of expecting the story end to be an operatic bloodbath, you really suprised me with the ending, but I mean that in a good way.