Great Strip, man
i loved it and i think it deserves more than the rating score it has, it could use bg music though
Author Comments
This is my first flash movie..
It's just a comic.
Please watch and tell me if the layout should be changed, and your thoughts.
Also the end is kinda like an inside joke.
(Next comic will have music in the background, PM me if you have a song on newgrounds you would like me to use.)
Nice!
Nice comic strip man, make more!
LunArFoX00 responds:
I'll see what I can do, And the next one will be much better, don't worry.
I'm just happy this wasn't blammed..
nice
very good :)
but maybe animating would be more exiting?
LunArFoX00 responds:
Yeash, I'm going to try that out, Kinda still working on it, Thanks.
Not that good
The images beween frames are unstable and keep moving around. If you ask me the plot wasn't that well written. Write a better story and ry to keep the frames stable.
LunArFoX00 responds:
This was basicly an experiment, Just released to the public.
Don't worry, The actual story will be soon... (LegacyReborn)
Good Job
Needs Sum Work But It Was Realy Funny
You Could Add Voices And Mabee Get Rid Of The Buttton....Have It Go On Its Own
But Gj
LunArFoX00 responds:
Not so sure about the voices but thanks, The thoughts help alot.
The next one will be alot better!