I'm really glad you tried, but.....
I'm very glad that you tried. It's a great idea to do this. However, this was a really bad, terrible, awful, no-good tutorial. You try to jam too much into each screen, you don't explain things well at all, your grammar makes things even more difficult to understand, and the formatting is weird, so that explanations are located in weird places, and things that ought to be on one screen are on two instead. As well, please try using a color scheme for games like this. A riot of primary colors is hard on the eyes and really, with tutorials, visual appeal is about 1/3 of the value.
Thank you so much for trying this, and I hope that you or someone else improves on this great idea, but I think it needs a lot of retooling to be useful.