zomfg no sounds!
but i lawled! lawlolawlolawlolawlolawl! and i did it all over your carpet too!
In every meaning of the word.
This is great for your first animation!
Your gonna be great! Try some more detailed drawing.
It's actually very very nice, it must have taken a very long time to be made, but I can see your animation's flow is smooth, and very neat. You still have to get used to SFX and camera movement, and include some "eye candy", but overall you've done an awesome job, and I'm sure you'll come up with great stuff. If you need any help with animating (because I don't know shit about Action Scripting). Feel free to go to my userpage and mail me your questions.
Make some sound next time and it could be a lot more popular!11 :D