This is a simple project I did for my creative writing class. We had to sell an item that one would normally throw away, so I picked a ripped up piece of paper, and went under the fake company name of Scott-Co. I had about a week and a half to work on this project, and it was limited to school time only because they have flash and now I don't. In that period of time I learned how to do a lot. This one has a preloader that I made myself, but give it a few seconds incase there was a problem with the actionScript. Please tell me your honest opinion on it, and tell me what I could do different.
P.S. Scrolling text can be controlled by either the buttons or by the mouse wheel.
not the greatest...
it was fun and all but the paper can't be fixed,you can't make a design of a plane with it,it just isn't speaking to other people that it's good.though,it was a good little project of what you can do with ripped paper so i give credit for that.i give it a five,work on this some more.
ummm...
newgrounds is not the place for school projects... sorry
Meh...
It was alright, although I don't really know why you put it on newgrounds. I liked the choice of music, but overall it wasn't very interactive. The main reason I'm giving you a 6, however, is because it featured Achmed the dead terrorist. Next time you make a flash similar to this, make it a bit more interactive before putting it on newgrounds.
Goldfish approves.
