Wuh? A bit wierd.
Why would Kaneda ask for help with hitting a clown?
Draw a bit more detailed. Loop the sound. The clown should be drawn in the same detail as the motorcyclist if you can. I'm not sure it would help the rating of the flash, because this piece really need more story :) (maybe akira fans will appreciate it more??)
Don't take it too hard though :) and keep making flashanimations!
this one of my first assignments for flash class so naturally it's not going to be all that good, I really just needed a place to put it up just in case my computer screws up. on top of that I was just learning scripting and it was really frustrating even just doing this. thx for the decent and fair response considering all of the negative ones out there. It was actually meant to be really short and this was also part of the assignment. Maybe I should've just put it on private for my own self I guess. Suppose I'll just have to do that for the later ones since they'll be misinterpreted.