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Tactical Directive Pt1 v1

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Dec 28, 2008 | 9:12 PM EST
  • Daily 2nd Place December 30, 2008

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Tactical Directive

Part 1: The Goldwin Betrayal

Volume 1

Volume 2 Link... /portal/view/476173

So here it is...finally. It took almost two years, but it's finished. This is my first flash to actually feature voice acting so I hope you guys enjoy it. All of my voice actors worked very hard and I'm extremely grateful for that. Anyway, enjoy the movie, as well as the menu and special features I have provided.

Also, I tried to create a skip chapter button for skipping to the next scene but Actionscript hates me. However, I did put a menu button at the top of the screen so you can go back to it at any time during the movie and just go to the scene selection.


-Matt Hunter



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very good

This is a very good animation and the effort you put into this really shows. I'm giving you a 10 for the overall animation, but I did find a lot of room for improvement which I will outline and I hope you consider for future works. Before I do so, I will let you know that this is fantastic. I'm glad it's very long and that the story is good. The animation is for the most part great. Everything is very distinguishable and the story makes sense and is for the most part easy to follow. I'm giving you a 10 based on the fact that you had this idea, and really followed through very well. The subtitles were a great addition and made it very easy to follow along with the story and in case you couldn't hear anything (I didn't have this issue) you would be able to read along.

As far as room for improvement, I see a lot also. The voice acting wasn't exactly professional. Although the voices were very clear and easy to understand, they seemed to lack the emotion and character depth I would expect for a movie of this type. I would suggest getting really into character for future works and trying to feel the emotions that the character would feel if you were in that situation, as it seemed devoid of that in multiple places.

The drawings were decent for the work. I could understand what was going on totally, but obviously there was some parts that didn't look as pleasing as they could. I think you could have spend more time on them, or drawn some things a bit better.

Other than that, the story was really good, and I enjoyed watching this. The effort paid off and really produced a nice piece. I liked the humor you added into this as well. It was a great relief from the story and pretty funny also. I hope that you keep it up and just make some minor improvements for the better because you have tons of potential. Keep up the good work!!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

nice job!

great work!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

tactically good

Extremely good movie!I dont like very much of drama but,you know,there are exceptions...


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Hell yeah!

Looking so awesome! Great work man, can't wait to see where you go from here :D

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Rated 5 / 5 stars


I don't quite understand why those losers below me gave this a bad review. This is probably one of the most well scripted, and acted, movie on newgrounds. Well done, i applaud you.