pretty good. =)
the sound wasnt too bad and the plot was pretty good. make the screen bigger and the sound better including the animation and this might be a famous crime series.
Turned out well
I enjoyed the flash, it had good music and looked preaty good.
U could work more on the graphics, and on the dialoge. The lines were kind of predictable.
I see this turning into a good series, keep it up.
Very detaill..small comedy...very movie-like....it's good
this could potentially be epic.
its obvious to me youve put alot of thought and effort into your story..something many people seem to forget about. with each passing minute i found myself getting more into the story. you and your voice actors have done and exceptional job putting this together. your preview for part 2 was also very well done. im looking forward to the next episode.
now here come my gripes. though there was alot of effort put into your voice acting, it seemed to lack a little in the quality department. also in some scenes the music seem to over shadow the voices. also..your stage was somewhat small, making it difficult at times to read the actual dialogue.
one could say you could simply cut the subtitles since you already have voice actors. but thats just me.
once again i applaud your efforts and look forward to your next submission.
keep up the good work