Notbad
~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, kinda neat, could use abit of "COLOR" though, but for the mostpart it was ok, keep up the flashing
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color to enhance it.
~~OVERALL~~
Decent animation needs some color though
~X~
Hahaha, FINALLY! My very first animation, everrr!! And no its not a stick animation. Its not very long since it was made in one day. I'm quite proud of it. I know its not perfect but oh well, I'm improving!
Oh and its a rotoscope of my older brother.
Notbad
~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, kinda neat, could use abit of "COLOR" though, but for the mostpart it was ok, keep up the flashing
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color to enhance it.
~~OVERALL~~
Decent animation needs some color though
~X~
pretty good!
for a first submission: well done!!!
could do better with sound though...
and even though the title was 'noodles' i didn't get what happened in the flash.
overraly, well done, the animation was very well
it was nice :)
Usually people expects alot from flash movies. Hell should i say it was simple to the eye and short, but i loved it :), a gazillion times better of what i could do actually XD. Good luck
you got skill and it looks promising
2 words: color and sound. You get those 2 down as well as your animation and newgrounds might have a new flash series to promote. Great job on your first flash
Ah?
Ok sorry to say but I found this a little boring. The style of it is great and I can't believe you made this in one day. But anyways I got one thing to say, Pre-loader. It took me sometime to load since I got dial-up. Also add some voices.