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The Ramke For the Classic Flash Movie For Karanusha

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.-. f065 and lol thats what mario said

Criticism.

As a fellow spriter, I am happy to say that most of this was actually alright. I'm gonna break this down though:

Good things.
- Funny.
- Made sense (unlike most sprite movies I see)
- Had a plot

Bad things (oh god, here we go):
- animation was poor. you really could've done better.
- some frames showed up to be a little off edge (white background appeared)
- in some places where you marked to put places (I saw) you forgot to erase the marks.
- There's one thing that really wanted me to blam this (but I resisted the urge): some sprites were left with the background of it's former sprite sheet there and/or you didn't make blood smooth or mouths move that much. That's one thing that REALLY kept bugging me.

5/10=1/2, 3/5.

nice!

its was crappy at the start but the rest was kool :D i liked it

Awesome...

I love 1-Ups, and this is awesome. :3

Pretty good

~~REVIEW~~
That was pretty good, i liked it good looking sprites fast and smooth animation, it all worked out and was fun, nice job on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Didnt see anything maybe some flash effects but for the mostpart it was good

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash good animating

~X~

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Score
2.31 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 27, 2008
10:04 PM EST
Genre
Comedy - Parody