Good Effort,
Pretty good for your first movie, better than I could do anyway :)
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Ok this is my first great production on flash, i hope you like it, but, is not so good than another i just watched before here. buy ok, i hope you like it, XD a Dragon Ball Z Parody, by Imaru.
Watch it!, please XD
Imaru responds:
thank you very much, i appreciate it that ;)
Getting close
I couldn't understand the end dialogue, so with that in mind here is what I think:
The fight felt like you were holding back, for whatever reason. It felt very tame, when what I think what you were going for was epic.
What I would suggest is that you storyboard your fight scenes first.
When you are storyboarding, you are a lot more 'optimistic' about what is achievable - then when you start to animate you actually aim higher than what you would normally think you are capable of.
Keep at it.
Imaru responds:
yeah, you're right, and for everyone who watched my animation, i can't put the subtitle,but it's says, "Wait,wait,wait, dude... Why are we fighting?", i ruined with that, i know XD, but, hey!... it's my first, i'm still being just a rookie, i going to make more animations and growing up with them', i hope you can help me with that you people n.n XD, I NEVER GIVE UP!!, really thanks for watch it n.n
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I have the strangest feeling that my idea from monday wuz taken....
oh well good job!
i see
great music, very good movie and nice animation, next time, add sound when they hit each other, makes it a lot cooler.
Imaru responds:
Thanks, good advice, i took it in my futures animations XD, thaks!