santa

this is good but could be much better with some decent animation

....i have two words that describe this flash.

Donkey Balls.

I...

I kind of liked it, but there was a big problem I had with it: the voices.

I'm not saying I hate your voice, it's just that you didn't show emotion. It was almost all the same tone. If you've heard speakonia before, you should know that speakonia doesn't give off emotion. And when you consider just how exaggerated the mouths become while watching this, it is a disappointment that it is so bland. Also, the voices of the different people sounded kind of the same.

Add emotion for all voices. When speaking as different characters, try talking differently, and record the results. One of them might work. And before you decide if a voice is terrible, get another opinion from someone else. We all hear our own voices differently than other people, so what you think sounds terrible might be good, and vice versa.

Fix those two, and it would be a major improvement.

The rest of the problems were minor.

Make sure the voice is clear and that the background noise doesn't drown it out. The train did that while Jesus was talking.

Also, it was unclear what was going on in certain scenes. For instance, I wasn't quite sure what was going on with the yellow stuff during the chase scene. I thought it was a beam, but I couldn't tell. I'm not asking you to draw perfectly, but do try to make sure the viewer can tell things like:

1. characters' bodies

2. scenery or objects

3. special effects

It was kind of hard to tell sometimes. I know it make be difficult to draw some things, but it might help to put focus on the basic outline of something. I wasn't quite sure what the black vehicle was that the police were chasing, but if you could focus on the outline of it better, then I might be able to tell.

I did like the movie. I really like the way Santa transitioned to the floor. Seriously. I thought it was cool.

good or bad?

i reakky didnt know what to say about this. it needed better graphics. and better vice but i liked how it was the grinch.

stll good cant wait till u get good at this

it was funy