Alright for a first timer.
The animation does need work but I understand having hardware limitations.
Next time you could try using some tweening, (There are plenty of tutorials on the internet.) and maybe use a blur filter to show changing focus. And try to add a little more action for ep. 2, you can do gradual scaling wth motion tweens that might help make things look a bit smoother.
it's ok but the animations could use some work. (ps i'm no better ^_^)
This was kewl, but you have stuff to improve
storyline was ok, but you have to improve your style. keep it up!
Wy better than the first
Pretty food now instead of waiting for the reading to pass after i read it i can just press a button nice man
ya i was reading about action script, then i realized how is this gonna work, its taking way too long at first. Then when i made this version, the text was too long and the fps was too fast. so i used stop on the frame, then put the play button there for everyone.
the story is great! but you need a better animatin and longer episodes
Good LUCK and waiting for ep. 2;)
thnks for the review. I plan on starting episode 2 soon. i already sktched the scenes on paper. and i just need to get the script done, not necesairily dialogue, but how each scene is going to work out. The story only really begins unfolding next episode