it was nice and fluid, so good job, gave me a chuckle.
the sound needs a lot of improvement (although i still dont think i could do as good) its funny the animation was smooth and jerk free (thats a first in a quick stick flash!) but it desperately needs to be longer. but you certainly have talent
Well this could use some improving, voices for one, and some improved character details maybe a better plot, and more detail in the backrounds aswell
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above
Funny but needs more
I guess it's okay but the volume was too loud and it wasn't really that clear what he was losing
Not bad for 13
You obviously have a good grasp on FBF, and some good body movements.
A very smooth animation.
You have potential. Just keep at it, and maybe try some bigger projects. Maybe even move on the some full body stuff in the future.
yeah. i was about to upload it and was like "oh noes! i forgot to add sound!" so i recorded that all in one take in about 20 seconds.