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The Struggling Artist

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This is my first submission to Newgrounds. I know it's short, but I have some bigger projects that also require my attention. This was very fun to make, as it helped me learn the Flash program. Hopefully it will be fun to watch.

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Mmmm sticky

Despite the fact that this was stick figure art, you showed emotion and weight with your piece. Keep doing this and transfer it to your other animations. You'll turn out a star!

Nice one David!!

This is Rad!

Keep up the good work.

meta?

kudos and welcome!
i was very surprised by the smooth animation, and it only made the flash more fun and easy to like by staying short and simple.
i'm glad you have more in the works...i would suggest moving away from stick figures, though.
you have the talent to do something even better and more stylized!
good luck!

davidstanley responds:

thanks for your review! everyone has been really nice so far. you are right about the stick figure thing, actually I hate how everyone is always doing stick fights! But I needed to do something clean, and crisp, so the stick seemed to work. I can't wait to do some epic stories.

Gold Star for you!

Hey, that was really good for a first flash =D I hope to be half as good as you when i start XD lol.
Can't wait to see more! ^^

4/5
7/10

liked it

really smooth animation, especially for a first submission, plus, it was tooootally retarded which is right up my alley. short and sweet and goofy. keep it up man. keep going for quality rather than quantity.

davidstanley responds:

Thanks for your awesome review! I have something in the works right now, definitely longer and with an actual plot. Hopefully I can have quality AND quantity! Keep your fingers crossed for me haha

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4,460
Votes
14
Score
3.46 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 21, 2008
12:57 PM EST