It was funny
yo thats some funny shit yo the only thang I would say it needs and Im not trying to be mean here but the drawings could have been beter agian im not trying to be mean (god knows I cant draw)
"Thinking can be fun once you get the hang of it." I think this is my new slogan.
Plotline: Good. Not a whole lot more you could have done with it. If you haven't done this already, storyboarding helps a lot with longer stories.
Art/Animation: Average. Look up some tutorials on character building; it'll help a lot.
Sound: is there. A little background noise from the TV channels would have added a good amount to this.
Overall, not bad for a first submission. Keep at it.
The drawings could've been a bit more detailed, but they weren't bad. The whole flash fits together very well, and I like your sfx, especially for the footsteps. The whole thing about consulting the doctor was pretty good too. I see that this is your first submission, but I hope to see more.