Love the sounds on this one xD
Short and fun :)
especially considering that flash is not your forte, your style is unique though, which is a definite asset to you, also, nice choice of music, and good overall sound quality. You might want to go easy on the outlines though, and don't be afriad to watch modern cartoons geared for a younger audience if you need technical advice on character design. If you have any questions about flsh animation, feel free to PM me.
Good for a Beginner, Bad for a Pro.