Perfect!
Respect dude, respect. XD I'd suggest you submit the actual flash, not a video, it's fuzzy. Credits and titles can all be done on flash very easily.
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this was originally on you tube but i decided to start putting my series here
also i know its bad quality but I'm currently remaking it by making it longer and if i can funnier
elephantdead responds:
i know thanks for the tip but the thing is i did this a long time ago and now i deleted the cartoon from my computer so no i wish i had not deleted it :(
Nice premise
It's pretty funny, That gag reminds me of that Ben Stiller movie. But yeah, you should make it longer and rerelease it at original flash quality.
indeed
music: 8/10 the music suited the movie well, you should keep it to your next or even better.
animation: 7/10 good animations, like you said, try to remake it a bit better. still not bad.
movie itself: 8/10 keep the fun flowing, the guy on the toilet, that kind off humor makes it cool and funny.
conclusion: 7, i hope you improve on your next on, it will be great, i almost can guess:)