right, the animation was good, but i don't really understand japanese or any other language other than english. i just don't really get it, all i got was theres a riot and some gayass mouse with a mouth bigger than pikachu's, after its given someone a blowjob, i think you could make it better by making the song english.
Altho your animation skills are good your storyline wasnt fresh
i suggest adding more original ideas instead of the same ideas used in numerous anime shows before this, as well as further back, Shakspeare did it!
Your creation was unique only in the way it was a music video of the story, which isnt the best thing ever, i reccomend using voices and more elaborate sounds to increase story production and progression.
Im saying, add more depth into it, make it your own, be more creative, and good luck, you have the skill to do so
No mas. No mas.
just because it has some nice and "purty" drawing that would attract people from the otaku culture doesn't mean this was a properly written story. All I saw was flashy images with some racism in between, it was certainly well animated but that only led to the biggest problem.The biggest problem is that it was such a let down from expectations, I see a bunch 10 reviews and get shown something that isn't a 10. This didn't make me cry at all or move me emotionally don't know how the heck this movie is beating a masterpiece like "last of the dashkin" but I guess it's like Justing Beiber. People just like poorly written stuff.
The animation was impressive, short but really nice, you finally added some dialog, and some new features to the animation, that was outstanding, but the simplicity of the ending was very disappointing, I was expecting something epic from you, like your other works, but this it's just not exactly how the series should have ended. There is She has transformed into an Icon for animation, and the first step had show how powerful does flash animation media could be, the future right now it's not exactly different, but now flash it's a web in which it has combined itself to the popular culture. What I try to say is that you created something very important, so I was expecting something much better from you, mister SamBakZa, for a series so epic as this one.
Dull and Uninteresting
The animation is smooth, if bland. However, the story is more bland than the animation.