Ok so this is my second attempt at making a movie. one of the comments on my last video said that i had a trail of flash. sad o say i actually purchased flash and am trying hard to succeed in flash. if anyone has tips to me on how to make it better, just say so! i appreciate comments and i also appreciate the minor put downs for that can show me how to improve. thank you for watching and enjoy the war!
ok... needs work
this doesnt really seem like a music video... though the song was great i like +44 and it fit the movie but it needed sound effects. also maybe chat bubbles but thats not a huge deal to me. mainly sound effects and fix the few bugs it had.... when the black army guy was shooting it would have a white square around him. keep it up.
You can improve moajorly, kay?
Now I'm not one to give a low review, so you're lucky.
But what you should do is make it so the text is readable, make it so we can see the other guys fighting in the war as well, and try to make the screena little bit bigger so I can see what's going on.
Other than that, not bad for your second attempt.
Keep up the somewhat good work!
That was...
Pretty sweet.