wow
that bird just got pooped on....
Author Comments
Hello , this is my first flash , i downloaded the 30 day free trail for flash and it took me almost have of that time to learn how to use it a little. Thanks to some of the tutorials here on NG i was able to almost finish it but my trail ended before i could put the credits and put the preloader anyway here are the credits:
Moral of the story?
When you are up to your neck in shit keep your mouth shut.
Animation: abismo (aka-memo)
Music: {PBJ}Pots and Pans{PBJ} by "pitbulljones" From the audio portal under pop.
PS: this is a story i heard when i was little but it stuck in my head forever...
please review iam planning on getting my hands on a flash program very soon so i can fix it but in the mean tme this will do.
Thanks.
Dude...
For your first flash... this is amazing.
Props to the dedication to the new concepts.
Keep developing your animating skills.
I SEE POTENTIAL!
Funny!!
This is really good for your first flash...keep up the good work.. the only this is that the music keeps playing when the movie repeats... so if your going to finish this.. Please fix that..
abismo responds:
thanks! yeah i couldnt finish it but i will fix it as soon as i get my own program
hmmm
Work on your sound affects a bit
other then that I would say it was pree decent i guess ill do my part in trying to keep this on
Keep making flash!
I voted five, not necessarily because you earned a five, but because I would really like to see you continue working with flash. For a first try and only thirty days you've provided us with a rather nice piece of work, that managed to hold as at least somewhat entertaining.
The animation was absolutely beautiful, especially the egg, but choppy. You could do well if you doubled or tripled the frame rate at least. You could also benefit by getting more thing on the screen to move at once. Finally, work on the fluidity of motion. Everything should flow like water, and shouldn't jerk around very much.
Finally, while the animation was done well, I feel that the story kindof sucked. Maybe you could get a friend to come up with some good ideas, yeah?
All said, I'm impressed with this as a first project, and would love to see more.
abismo responds:
Thanks for the review! you bring up exellent points i thank you.