Well
Its preety good for your first flash I can see that you will prosper itrought the years
Author Comments
Hello, Newgrounds visitors.
This is the first Flash Movie I've ever made. I tried to do it as well as I could. Don't be too harsh at my amateur's mistakes, though. I, myself, thought it was decent for a first try. But that's why I need your critique.
EDIT: Now added a preloader ( because the Newgrounds community seems to love preloaders ). If it doesn't work, I'll fix it immediatly.
ehhhhh......
it was alright but maybe you could have put in word bubbles,maybe a little longer maybe alright flash though=l
Mariofan9 responds:
8-bit characters nor Nintendo's protagonists actually speak. As mentioned before, it's my first project. My VERY FIRST project. Quality, not quantity, remember? Don't criticise it for being short, please.
pretty good i must say
i dont see any real weak points in this short flash. found it comical really.
Mariofan9 responds:
Thank you. But critique's quite useful: Is there nothing you'd like to add at all?
nice
i liked it
Mariofan9 responds:
Why thanks, but I would've liked some more detail ...
Pretty decent for your first flash ever.
But overall it wasn't too good. Make it more refined- Mario's feet didn't touch the ground. Also, I didn't really understand what exactly happened. "Bad guy came, got blown up"? Try and make it more... appealing.
Okay job for a start, though.
Mariofan9 responds:
I tried to make it look like the old 8-bit games, where that was a common "error". The storyline is very very simple. Mario comes, gets ambushed by enemy, enemy is killed by Link.
Thanks.