Gneh heh heh.
I had a good laugh. The fact it looks so amateurly done (no offense) gave it its charm. Well, actually, what made me laugh is the fact that you use external sound files to give other characters a voice.
Anyway, good job. The more you work on these, the better you'll get. And hopefully you'll find some more friends to do a little voice acting for you. At gun point, if necessary.