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Just a small upload to gain some constructive criticm.
So its not finished yet,, not at all..
But i'd like to know how ppl on ng like this way.
Im not entirely sure on how to do this either.
Do i have to turn it in some kind of storyline that goes on for a few subs ?.
Or do i have to make random battles of them each time.

I do not know what to do next xD
It stops at 'Water Nation' :P (well, its not stopping there at all, but its not done further)

Please give reviews on what to IMPROVE. like the animating way, and stuff.
And could someone show me a tut on how to animate water properly ?. since im having difficulties :P.

Take Care,
St0rmChaser

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so good

the best opening i ever saw good job


St0rmChaser responds:

Wow :D many thanks :D.
I will support the opening with some music to,
it will syncropate perfectly :D. (i hope).

enjoy,
St0rmChaser


amuzing

thats some good work you done there! ill wait for the next chapter pall:)


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St0rmChaser responds:

:D Thanks bjorn.

I wil finish this part first,
and after that, i shall consider of making a second story :P


Water Nation! :D

Water Nation...
...
...
Yeah man... Water Nation.

Please, put something in the title like, part 0.1, beta version, not finished, etc
Anyway, nice animation, nice graphics... Keep it!


St0rmChaser responds:

gee :D thanks a lot gregolini.

I will gladly finish it then :D.

take care,
St0rmChaser


Not really that much wrong with it.

The intro text moved pretty quickly but pausing it was easy enough, the only thing I saw was a few spelling errors in the opening text. This looks interesting, ill be looking forward to seeing more. 3/5


St0rmChaser responds:

thanks shadowknight :D.

yup, more ppl say that the opening text is bad.
This is because i dont have a real story yet.
But i will change it for sure with correct spelling.

Take Care,
St0rmChaser


Not bad, but....

It got stuck in the middle. Seems like it could have been good though.


St0rmChaser responds:

true. the movie goes till "Water Nation".

It was explained in the description :P.
Thanks for your review.

St0rmChaser

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Votes
256
Score
2.89 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 16, 2008
4:55 PM EST
Genre
Experimental
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