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Just a small upload to gain some constructive criticm.
So its not finished yet,, not at all..
But i'd like to know how ppl on ng like this way.
Im not entirely sure on how to do this either.
Do i have to turn it in some kind of storyline that goes on for a few subs ?.
Or do i have to make random battles of them each time.

I do not know what to do next xD
It stops at 'Water Nation' :P (well, its not stopping there at all, but its not done further)

Please give reviews on what to IMPROVE. like the animating way, and stuff.
And could someone show me a tut on how to animate water properly ?. since im having difficulties :P.

Take Care,


It depends

What you do with it depends on how much time you want to put into it. If this is just some sort of quick hobby, then just go with a few simple fight scenes. But, if you are seriously willing to put a whole lot of time into it, then go with the storyline. But seriously, think about whether you are going to put a whole lot of time into it before starting one. I really hate it when somebody starts a story and never finishes it.
Besides all that, it looked pretty great. The small fireguy movements were smooth and looked like some sort of kung fu. (That was the type of martial arts used by the fire people, right?)

Like I said, it looks great! Just think about how much time you'll be spending.

St0rmChaser responds:

Thanks for the large review P0IaND.

yup, kung-fu is the style firebenders have.
making these short fire animations cost me about 1 and a halve hour.
Animating with that speed, i dont think i would be able to deliver many submissions in a row.
But i still want to make it a story though !,
thanks for the review.


not bad

animation is good, plot is a little rip-offish you know what I mean, flash direction and layout are both great. keep up the good work, and don't be afraid to try something new.

St0rmChaser responds:

allright :D. i will try new things.
and thanks for the cool compliments :D
i will change the plot.

greets St0rmChaser


thats some good work you done there! ill wait for the next chapter pall:)

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St0rmChaser responds:

:D Thanks bjorn.

I wil finish this part first,
and after that, i shall consider of making a second story :P

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2.89 / 5.00

Dec 16, 2008
4:55 PM EST