good
coool
Author Comments
This took quite a while to make but then again I've only just started to experiment with Flash.
The character's name is Errick, he's from a story I've labeled 'Peacekeeper'.
The whole fight scene was referenced from a Naruto episode where Sakura is the character Errick's imitating. And the opponents are substitutes of Sasori.
I hope this is something anyone can appreciate.
Oh and btw, it loops.
awesome!
a great animation! i didn't even mind the fact that it was choppy; thought it gave it a nice effect! amazing job for a beginner! great work!
Very nice FBF animatics
The only marks against this (and they don't take away from your obvious skill at all) no sound, the motion is a bit clippy, and you apparently took this choreography from a tv show. You should try fleshing out your own sequence of movements, it's challenging but fun. I'm sure you'd be great at it.
This is really very good, I hope to see more from you.
3/5 7/10
RobCha1n responds:
I was thinking of putting in regular music but I thought a looping decent soundtrack in the background would make it sort of cheesy, but you're right, definitely gonna need audio next time.
I'll try that. ;]
And thanks, really appreciated.
It's allright.
Some of the parts are a seem a bit off, like the part where the guy gets punched towards the screen, and then suddenly it either replays or the other guy somehow teleports just in time to get a similar punch. Either way, it dosn't really seem to work very well. The part where he does a cartwheel also looks seems to need a little work, but aside from those two spots I think you've done fairly well.
RobCha1n responds:
Inorite? But it seems like I'm only having that problem on NG. DA and SA seems to lack that problem.
Thank you. :]
Very good for a beginner!
That's very nice!
Suggestion though: More drawings per second, it was a bit choppy.