that was horrible...
that was horibble
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My entry for the first art competition on the Avalon Academy RPG forum:
www.avalontales.proboards 101.com
Based on a cell phone battle between Little Red Riding Hood and Snow White
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Normal Copywright stuffs: I don't own Little Red Riding Hood or Snow White
JUST TO CLARIFY:
The characters don't look like they're supposed to because as I said above, it's based on an RPG where we used different PBs for characters.
I wanted to make something really simple as the deadline for the mini competition was like, an hour after I finished it.
Animation was purposefully very very simple,
The cell phone message was based on a thread on the forum, if you're not on it then you probably wouldn't understand it, I just needed a place to upload it though (it's a great site btw, check it out ^^)
And I couldn't add sound coz I didn't have any way of recording unfortunately.
I'm NOT making a series, I just put number 1 in the title in case I needed to upload further mini entries.
Thanks to those who enjoy it though ^^
I'd say...
The drawings were very good, even though they didn't resemble the original characters. However, I must say it was too short and didn't really fit in as a text war, I'd like to see how snow white would have replied.
ooooooooohhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that's harsh, 5/5!
Yerm......
The drawing is good, the style is pretty good. Animation is nearly not there, but that's not horrible, maybe you didn't have much time. I guess I just thought the subject was lame. I mean . . . Snow White ate an apple, so the choice of characters doesn't much make sense. Maybe if you picked Jack Horner. Also, I'm probably just too old and non-female to appreciate this. So I won't grade it down due to not liking it. You just lose some points for not animating movement and not having sound.
ah SEEIIIT!
Little red hiding hood owned that bitch, nice flash I thought this was blam material, but the drawings were actually pretty good. Hated that there was no noise though, at least add some clicking sounds or something.