I guess you did set the stage

well you have already acknowledged the bad quality that definatly could have been done better you just need to clean up your art work it seems like from the style you have chossen for your movie you are not trying to make it look realistic but still in my opinion you have to put some effort into line work and animation

but aside from that the joke that was deliverd had an alright set up it had an introduction a body and a punch line and you have introduced your characters just work an your art work

Despite bad animation...

It was an oklead off for your series, getting us aquainted with the charicters. I liked the juice box at the end lol clasic. All u need is some time on your animation and this would be great. Good luck with your next submissions =)

good direction

but the animation coulod use some work

Guy or Girl?

Was the person playing the game at the start a guy or a girl. It had a ponytail, yet had a guys voice.

I didn't like the animation all that much either

Jak, what are you doing in my house?

That was funny, but kind of confusing.