Excellent my friend
this flash holds a place in my heart.
Ahahahahaha! You are a true comedian my friend. That was some funny stuff there. Keep up the good work.
Everything Was Very Good And Deep! I Read Everything Word From Word. Plus Good Job And Keep Making Short Films Like This. Peace.
Some Constructive Criticism...
First, have a decent story.
Third, try a topic that's not so f'ing disturbing
Fourth, don't make something serious look so stupid
Fifth, don't think your all deep and artsy, your on newgrounds, not IFC
Sixth, please don't move on to further projects, you have alot yet to learn.
Seventh, just try again.
It was good, the animation style was interesting but what the hell happened? "I like a girl, so I raped her." It sure creped me right the hell out, but what?