i loved the story and the flash was great too
hope to more like it and maybe even a sequel?
I like it
The overall idea is very touching and more complex than the average submission that i see on Newgrounds, and i enjoyed that deeply. Unfortunately, the voice of the little boy was a bit forced at times, and the writing a little corny. for example, his laughter while in the living room before he pretends to be a plane doesn't seem real and if the voice actor couldn't make it sound real, it should have been cut. In the father's line when he's giving the plane to his son, uplifting is just corny. Also, him clearing his throat before talking seemed unnatural. When most things are very good, these problems really stick out. Something that is more of a matter of opinion is the fathers face after giving his son the plane and he is going outside. I would have made the father to look more sad, maybe a bit pained at his sons obsession with aviation, it being a constant reminder of the wife he has lost. I really like it when people submit more meaningful work to Newgrounds, i find them to most entertaining to watch. So i am really glad that you decided to make this animation and even though it has some problems i'm very happy with it.
This seems like more of an introduction to something more, than of a self contained and finished piece. I hope you have thought about or are in the works of creating a sequel, i would love to see it.
This is touching.
A true work of art. It is very well-made, everything is... good. It's... just beautiful. Thank you for this piece.
that was so beautiful.