Very good stuff here
This wasn't amazing, but not terrible either. Infact it was somewhere in the middle but dont get me wrong I really like the style and even shows your effort and how well you are willing o take this, I was enlightened with this nifty flash movie, and all that it represents and thats all good as it was a decent entry. Very good animation here and the "VOICES" are awsomly perfect and so fitting for the story, you really gave it that feel of being in a different time and such. I was most amazed with all the little stuff this flash had to offer, it was alot of little things that really made me enjoy this flash, so a good effort put fourth and was pretty good i thought keep at it.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok so lets make this even better this submission has some good potential, And the facts are in that this could use some more changes, And I hope I can help you with that here today with a few ideas. Kinda ended shortly wish there was a tad more to the story, other then that it was pretty impressive.