Esta aceptable
Hey busca una camara digital, tacaño
Author Comments
primera serie flash que subo a newgrounds encontre mi estilo xD
espero que lo disfruten^^
for english:
first set to upload to flash newgrounds found my style xD
I hope that you enjoy ^ ^
2 bad things
it's not bad, but there are 2 things that annoyed me
1. Bad video quality
2. the texts weren't english.
rather good for the rest, the chips were lol =)
Jorge90 responds:
the video is in cell phone xD, why my camera is the sell T.T
Buen Clip!
Buena combinacion! xD
10/10 5/5
Jorge90 responds:
pues si ya sigo con el otro si tuviera una camara digital xD ya q me toco por celular moto rock en fin algo es algo
Hmmm
This is not actually a flash.
Try not to use translators in the author comments (yeah, I noticed that you used one).
Also, if you want to NGers to understand your flash a little bit more, you should make EVERY single thing in english.
Now, about the camera quality, it's really bad, you should buy a new one. Recording something in your house is pretty bad, it doesn't look like a scary place for a DOOM based movie to happen. You should atleast make it at night, it looks more creppier at night.
And an important thing: ADD A PRELOADER. Seriously. Add one.
Jorge90 responds:
hears the camera phone is cellular and night LESS SE VE XD
is just my first flash
The Preloader already and I got together for what the next
P.D:no way I would put it in English.
hurra for spanish
