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The Old Eraser Gag

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This is a small (and techinically first I guess) flash I made in about 4 hours after thinking about old cartoons for a while. Let me know what I need to work on... hmmm... 3593 characters left huh?... oh well, enjoy I guess.

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Not Bad

Not bad, i like it. But i think ther is 1 thing quite fun about this movie, and that is about the little boy who been eraser his head by a huge pencil..... and he shout for a while, then keep drawing his pic(or writing) for a sec.......
HE IS DEAD~~~~


AdequateJ responds:

thankyou!, I think him falling over dead was the best part, afterall it needed an ending... was that egotistical?


wow

That was freaking awesome for such a short film!! Man i always thought about what would happen if they did that for real. lol good job nice animation and good sound. (maybe you should try this with the winter preloader and enter it in to the contest?)


AdequateJ responds:

That's not a bad idea, but i don't think it has enough to do with christmas...


It was ok...

It was ok, i mean the animation was awesome, but it was too short

Good points:-
Animation was awesome
Music tied in well
Everything went according to plan

Bad points:-
That scream was a little over the top!
It was too short.

Overall: Yeah i think this animation has potential, i suggest making it longer! I have given you 7 stars and will be voting 4/5

Good score!
Lizzardis


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AdequateJ responds:

thankyou! yeah, it was shorter than I like to see in flashes, but it was kinda hard to make longer when the only character is dead. I do agree with you on the scream, but it was the best I could find.

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Score
3.00 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 10, 2008
5:41 AM EST
Genre
Comedy - Original
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