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Uploaded
Dec 9, 2008 | 3:21 PM EST

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Author Comments

hey newgrounds this is my first flash submitted to newgrounds. so dont be harsh on me and if someone could help me figure out how i get the little picture icon for my flash movie i would appreciate it a ton, thanks and enjoy.

*edit* i forgot to mention this was a rushed project for my advanced animation class. so i could have made it better but i ran out of time. but be assured you will see alot more from me and much better.
thanks for the support and constructive critisim its appreciated.

Reviews


XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

This was entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
This was a cute and entertaining flash i love the character shows you have good detail, you could detail the backround abit better, maybe with some flying birds or something to make it look abit more real.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround details would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash cute and funny, nice work

~X~


icetray111 responds:

yeah i know. This was a rushed a project. I didnt like doing it either which is why i rushed to get it done and plus I ran out of time cause i procrastinated :P.

But thanx for the review man. i could use some constructive critism.


CyberdevilCyberdevil

Rated 3 / 5 stars

lol

Well that was random. It's a nice animation, very creative, some fun concepts, text in the clouds is a neat idea . . . the graphics could use some more detail though, zoom in and add shade/etc to make them even better, or smoothen out a little. Overall it's a good start, keep at it.

-cd-


icetray111 responds:

ty man i will see to it i do better in future projects


JamesBJamesJamesBJames

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Uh...

This... isn't a haiku.


icetray111 responds:

yes it is. its just not your everday hiaku but its set up like one. we did in class together


theguyinyourdumpstertheguyinyourdumpster

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Hmm...

So-so animation, but some potential is there, good sense of humor, I'd like to see more of these, haikus could be funny flash form now that I think about it.


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icetray111 responds:

thanks