i dont know if it was what you were aiming for or not, but it reminded me alot of the new movie coming out called "The Spirit" the black and white with just about only red as a color that is seen
that was a pointless story board!but i liked the picture quality
it's a pretty intresting view of the holidays though i will have to agree with you
Nice X-Mas Story.
I found it amusing, and the art-work was very good.
The reason I'm giving 8/10 stars, is because of two things:
1. The voice-acting.
The main character and the "Fat-Santa" Burglar had good voices, but the music in the background made them very hard to hear. You could done better with the sound-editing, so shame on thee!
2. The storyline.
The story had a certain depth to it, and was exciting. The monologue before the encounter with the "Fat-Santa" Burglar was allright, and it fit good with the mood of the film. I wasn't really happy about the ending though, because it was unnecessary to let our "hero" to break his neck.
And what about the main objective? It disappeared as soon he dialed 911, and left the crime scene. Imo, I would let the main character knock out the "Fat-Santa" Burglar (Not break neck. It's kinda too lol'd for a serious short like this), un-tie the girl, receive a "Thank-you" Kiss, take the money (And the girl maybe? :3), THEN dial 911, and take off to the horizon. Yay.
.. I liked the "There's allways a next year" line though :)
That is probable for the season, except the guy gettin' his ass handed to him by some random ninja guy.