It is sometimes hard to stay ona focused path with everything going on in a flash world but you made a good flash and even took it furthure, and you have for sure acomplished alot with this. This Suited my taste just fine, And Excitedly at that. This was some nice work here, lots ofgood action and a story to go with, you could ad some voices to go along with the dialog it would have made this so much better. Hmm ok well its time I try and end this review now but with all the above said I hope there is some helping ideas, I know I got a good experience from this, it has some entertaining value to it, it has some pretty good visuals, and was an overall fun flash of works that you have here, maybe in the future you can produce more works of art like this.
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I can see you doing a Tweak here and there on this one, you could ad some voices to go along with the dialog it would have made this so much better.