It is sometimes hard to stay ona focused path with everything going on in a flash world but you made a good flash and even took it furthure, and you have for sure acomplished alot with this. This Suited my taste just fine, And Excitedly at that. This was some nice work here, lots ofgood action and a story to go with, you could ad some voices to go along with the dialog it would have made this so much better. Hmm ok well its time I try and end this review now but with all the above said I hope there is some helping ideas, I know I got a good experience from this, it has some entertaining value to it, it has some pretty good visuals, and was an overall fun flash of works that you have here, maybe in the future you can produce more works of art like this.
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I can see you doing a Tweak here and there on this one, you could ad some voices to go along with the dialog it would have made this so much better.
Why using my name :| -5 STARS
The different art styles hurts this a bit but I've seen your newest work ;0
This is SMBZ you noob! jk jk, anyways great work, like the style but just as kind of a suggestion im not sure you should be making direct inferences of it, kinda gives noobs something to say ya know? keep up the good work though
i love this series, its cool,intristing, man it just took me from the start KEEP MAKING VIDEOS!!!!!!
Well, mario didn't have to go as far as that..
..Anyways, this is the 2nd time I have watched the series, and it is still good!