Cool
It was a lot better than I anticipated. I was expecting really really basic flash, but your very good at drawing and the animation was not bad at all either. Well done!
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I just got cs4 so I decided hey what the heck Imight as well test it out... >_< I reallydo lovethe program but I really REALLYneeda tablet LOLS This is just me testing it out so bare withme :P SONG BELONGS TO GACKT!!!! I <3 HIM!!! :D
here was your problem
One there is no pre-loader so I thought is was frozen for a second.
- Add one
Second I loops and that is not cool man. Add some reason into this.
-The graphics are cool but it is useless when there is no meaning and there is no where to stop!
Third don't put your little test flashes on newgrounds.
-That's not what newgrounds is for.
Fourth rename your submission once it gets through.
- Because your not going to make it to top 50 with the name "my First flash", or "Testing in flash" etc.
Sakaru-Haruna-1 responds:
Thank you for the advice :P
Not too bad
Which Gackt song is this?
Sakaru-Haruna-1 responds:
Tsuki No Uta <3
Well done
For being a first it was nicely made, the lines were well placed, and the animation was smooth, all that was lacking was some real color.
Sakaru-Haruna-1 responds:
Thanks very much :D
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