It was a lot better than I anticipated. I was expecting really really basic flash, but your very good at drawing and the animation was not bad at all either. Well done!
here was your problem
One there is no pre-loader so I thought is was frozen for a second.
- Add one
Second I loops and that is not cool man. Add some reason into this.
-The graphics are cool but it is useless when there is no meaning and there is no where to stop!
Third don't put your little test flashes on newgrounds.
-That's not what newgrounds is for.
Fourth rename your submission once it gets through.
- Because your not going to make it to top 50 with the name "my First flash", or "Testing in flash" etc.
Thank you for the advice :P
Not too bad
Which Gackt song is this?
Tsuki No Uta <3
For being a first it was nicely made, the lines were well placed, and the animation was smooth, all that was lacking was some real color.
Thanks very much :D