Not perfect, you still have a few issues, like you still have a few grammatical errors, but it seems your spelling has improved to the point where I can't see any errors in that department, and you still can't seem to match what is being said (verbal) to what is being written. I did like the jokes, though, and Tails seems like a bit of a brat, but I can live with that. For part 1, I give you a 4/5. (Newgrounds vote system, the happy face system is my own, custom, system.)
keep it up. all of you. it can only get better from here.
I liked when Sonic beat up Tails, and really digged that Desert Dweller's voice, so points for that! but, Ijust don't like the story much. Don't take it wrong. That's just my opinion.And *ahem* where was Knuckles? No Knuckles, no 10. nice cliffhanger though.
Knuckles WILL be in the next story. I'm introducing one major Hero per story and he will be Full Knuckles at his basest going back to his roots.
As forr the story itself Give it a chance to get going mine do i tend to build the characters first before we throw any sort of a real plot into it
I love the opening to this one! I thought I was the only one who remembered Izzy Glow's awesome theme from Megaman X5. Right off of Sonic Origins and yet it still feels so fresh! Voicegirl is so good as Tails, a great addition, but heck, all of them did a great job in this, you too Milanous. Makes me want flash so I could fully understand the diffcultly and time it takes to make these, truly my favorite along with Sonic Origins 3 & 2. Great animation, great wrting, and over all a great start!
has alot to look forward to