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Well, the reason I didn't finish it is because its a typical dbz stick animation. I wanted to work on something more worthwhile.
Anyway, this is a typical dbz stick animation. It's VERY short so don't expect anything average length.
If you will judge on my animation, and what I need to improve on. Thanks.
Well, it's ok...
The graphics were pretty good, but it was short. If i was to make any suggestions, make it longer. (note- im not one to write long reviews) Anyways, for a 2nd or 3rd flash animation, it was good.
I thought It ws kinda funny, especially the srick death:D You should do it again and make it longer:D
i wasn't even bad... a bit more details and a bit... bit longer and it would be a well made flash
never give up ;)
The effects were average at best, and the animation was stiff and jerky. Try adding a bit more frames, and make it more fluid. That, and try taking some particle tutorials, that should help.
This could have come out really good man. I can't believe you cut your self short like this. 6 out of 10 because of how short it was
A new original animated series done in pixel art!
The last man on Earth sat alone in a room...
After the breakup.
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