ooh you dark bstard
looks fucking sweet there mate, you need some audio as the rest of them said tho
footsteps nd maybe a heartbeat, and a quiet little song too could go quite well.
my musix is only one click away...
im impressed tho, flash player doesnt give it enough detail as you said, but i like the colour scheme and the sketchy feel...
it's part of a longer film?
anyhoo i vote 5
The animation/rotoscope is very smooth and I like the feel of it. The only thing I would suggest is to make it bigger and add some background music. But its good by itself all the same. ^^
For A small part of a film it's great.Well even if you only want feedback you shuold have put an preloader,but that's not the deal now ,is it?
AUDIO: well there was no audio,but im looking forward to your whole movie,so i hope u will add some wicked song :)
GRAPHICS: well you put yourself in this thing,i see that that was a realy HARD work,and with that i want to congratulate you ,you wanted to do something special and you did.The whole idea ,well right now there isn't much of idea but this flash was great because ,well originality,i never saw a flash in ur style(btw like the heart on that dude ) one of the best thing's was those buildings that you coulnd't see so good,i think you shouldn't change that,so yeah GOOD LUCK with your movie,im looking forward to it :)(Ima ur first fan :D)
Great, but only on art
The art that you drew was great and had a nice, consistent style. I know that creating an animation with that art with a better framerate would be extremely difficult and time-consuming, but I didn't take off anything for that. But there wasn't any type of story or explanation or even sound. Maybe this would be great for a music video.
that kind of drawing leads up to one thing...
make a horro movie! with the type of graphic in the beginning, and some creepy music it would be awesome!
now onto this, its a little entertaining but its nothing too you know... yea.