ooh you dark bstard
looks fucking sweet there mate, you need some audio as the rest of them said tho
footsteps nd maybe a heartbeat, and a quiet little song too could go quite well.
my musix is only one click away...
im impressed tho, flash player doesnt give it enough detail as you said, but i like the colour scheme and the sketchy feel...
it's part of a longer film?
anyhoo i vote 5