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Phoenix Wrong: MotC

rated 3.23 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Parody

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Dec 5, 2008 | 1:19 AM EST

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Well everyone, I say hello to all you people in "We can make our own flashes"-land. I just got Flash the other day and created my very first Flash with it. Of course... It's a Phoenix Wrong. :P

I figured PW would be the perfect way to learn the functions of Flash and get a little experience with the NG submission system. If you don't care for it, that's understandable. I'm really looking for as much constructive criticism as I can get.

Anyways, I hope you at least mildly enjoy my Phoenix Wrong. ;)

Audio Credits:
1) Invader ZIM
2) Macarron Chacarron
3) Juno
4) Simpsons
5) Demitri Martin
6) SpongeBob
7) Looney Tunes
8) Family Guy
9) Jeff Dunham

EDIT: Bleh, upon watching it on here, I notice that the sound clips on scenes 1 and 3 are absolutely atrocious. They sounded much better in the program, but for some reason are nearly unhearable on here. I will be fixing this problem soon. Sorry for that. ^.^'



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


Huh...well, that was crazy :P

The beginning was bad.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

One thing...

The objections are far too loud, and the actual speaking is too quiet. Too hard to tell if it is actually funny w/o going deaf = P ( a small exaggeration).

TheDKofCLD responds:

I understand completely. XD I can't believe how screwy the actual product turned out to be... :(


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Almost great....

The character voices beed to be turned up.

TheDKofCLD responds:

Yeah, hence my edited note on the description. :P


Rated 3 / 5 stars

That's some good stuff right there.

Especially for a first try. My favorite was easily Number 7. Bugs Bunny is a classic.
On a number of the skits, however, the volume was a serious problem. It sounded as though you had recorded them off the TV or something and then pasted them into your flash. Number 3 was almost completely inaudible. I'm not sure the last one with Jeff Dunham worked. I laughed, but I can't say for certain if I was laughing at your movie, or just Jeff's standup.

Overall I give it a thumbs up. Polish up your next one and I think you'll do PW proud.

TheDKofCLD responds:

Thank you for your words of encouragement and honest score. I'll do my best to make the next one a hit. :)


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Wabbit Season

I liked the wabbit/duck season bit, but that was pretty much the only part that I got into. Decent for a mash up, though. Some of the audio fit in well, while some of it needed improvement.

TheDKofCLD responds:

Yeah, I know the audio was screwed up. It worked fine in the Flash program but when I exported and uploaded it, something went awry... Anyways, thanks for the review!